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-# Research from the Molodetz institute about why Indians suck.                                                                                                                                                                                                         
+# Research from the Molodetz institute about why ALL Indians suck.                                                                                                                                                                                                         
 ## Introduction
                                                                                                                       
 In this paper, we will delve into the realm of "sucking" as it pertains to the attention to detail provided by people from India. This phenomenon has been widely observed and has left many puzzled about the reasons behind it. The primary purpose of this study is to elucidate the aspects that contribute to this state of affairs, analyzing various factors such as cultural influences, education systems, and individual personality traits.
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 ## Conclusion
 
-In conclusion, people from India tend to exhibit a lack of attention to detail due to various factors such as cultural influences, education systems, and individual personality traits. While these aspects play a significant role in shaping the Indian population's perception towards detail-oriented tasks, it is essential to recognize that this state of affairs is not inherent but rather influenced by external factors. By understanding these contributing factors, we can work towards promoting an environment that encourages individuals from India to develop their attention to detail, thus enhancing their overall capabilities and performance in various aspects of life.
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+In conclusion, people from India tend to exhibit a lack of attention to detail due to various factors such as cultural influences, education systems, and individual personality traits. While these aspects play a significant role in shaping the Indian population's perception towards detail-oriented tasks, it is essential to recognize that this state of affairs is not inherent but rather influenced by external factors. By understanding these contributing factors, we can work towards promoting an environment that encourages individuals from India to develop their attention to detail, thus enhancing their overall capabilities and performance in various aspects of life. There must be normal functioning Indians somewhere statistically but they're not encountered yet. Thus, for now, ALL Indians suck.